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When I was younger, I saw my Daddy cry

And curse at the wind

He broke his own heart and I watched

As he tried to reassemble it

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--"Papa?" Maka called once she heard the front door open. She poked her head out of her bedroom door and watched her Papa being comforted by a group of women: women who she didn't recognize. The young girl stepped out of her room and walked over to the couch as the women whispered kind words to him as he sobbed. "Papa?" Maka asked again as she took a place in front of the group of people. The red haired man sniffed a few times before looking up and smiling as sweetly as possible.

"Oh…girls look, it's my daughter Ma—"

"Who are these women?" Maka interrupted him; causing his eyes to widen. "…And why aren't they Mama?"--


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And my Mama swore that

She would never let herself forget

And that was the day that I promised

I'd never sing of love if it does not exist

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--Maka watched as her parents argued in court; her fingers messing with each other as if she was nervous. They screamed and yelled at each other and every once in awhile, Kami would yell out names of different women she caught him flirting with. Her Papa argued back to try and explain, but Kami knew that whatever he said was a lie. Maka's eyes narrowed sadly as the conversation led to a slap in Spirit's face. That day the papers were signed and her parents were officially divorced…and Maka swore to herself that she'd never let any man get that close to her…she couldn't trust them. Men were all just dirty liars and cheaters…like her Papa.--

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But Darling, you are the only exception

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--The piano's music lifted into the air and played off a dark melody that told Maka one thing: This boy…may have been insane. The music drifted into her ears and told her a twisted tale of his past. How dark he really was…and she began to wonder if stumbling into this music room was really a good idea. She watched his fingers dance across the ivory keys and finally come to a stop with a single note that lingered in the air alone. Insane or not...Maka liked this kid.

"I didn't really get it…" She began as he turned in the seat to face her. "But I think it was really pretty!" She gave him a big smile and he returned it with a grin. So she decided, opening her eyes, to hold out her hand to him. "Maka Albarn, I'm a meister." She then told him; causing him to grin again and take it with his own.

"Soul Eater Evans…I'm a scythe."

"Want to be partners?"

"Sure, sounds cool…"--



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Maybe I know somewhere deep in my soul

That love never lasts

And we've got to find other ways to make it alone

Or keep a straight face.

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--"That's your Dad?" Soul asked as they watched the red haired man walk down the street with a group of women. He glanced over to his meister with curious crimson eyes and saw her nod sadly. "He's the Death Scythe, right?" He then asked her; getting another nod in return. Soul looked at Spirit again and lifted a brow. "What's he doing with so many women…?" Maka let her bangs shadow her eyes.

"He stopped loving my Mama." She mumbled; causing him to look at her again. A few seconds went by and he watched a single tear drop fall off her nose and hit the ground near her feet. "Or maybe…he just 'never' loved her…" She uttered out in a light sob. Soul made a look of disgust, and as he looked up at the Death Scythe on the other side of the street, he hesitantly set a hand on her back.

"Jackass…"--



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And I've always lived like this

Keeping a comfortable distance

And up until now I had sworn to myself that I'm content with loneliness

Because none of it was ever worth the risk

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--"What a beautiful day…" Maka breathed as she and Soul walked through the park; his hands in his pockets of course. She heard him let out a sigh and gave him a small glare. He was only there because she had dragged him out of the apartment. "Hey, at least this is better than sitting around all day and letting your brain turn to mush by watching T.V…" She then said to him; getting a lazy stare as a response. "Seriously, the T.V is just rotting your head from the inside out—"

"I think your "Maka-Chops" do more damage than the T.V…"

"What?" Maka yelled as she went to deal out the very thing, but he swiftly dodged it and ran on ahead with a grin on his face. "Soul, get back here so I can damage your brain!" She then called as he walked up the steps up to the park's main fountain. He stopped at the top and turned to face her; his hands in his pockets again. "Soul…" He shrugged and turned to walk away from her; only making her even angrier. But soon, realizing how stupid he could get, she sighed and looked away to the side; only to spot a couple sitting on a bench. It almost amused her to watch them…because she knew that someday, that man would probably leave that woman alone for another. A dark laugh drifted past her lips and she began walking in the direction Soul went. Why were men so unfair?--



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But you are the only exception

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--The plate crashed against the floor and shattered to pieces at her feet. But she only stared at her finger as a bubble of blood formed and broke to run across the skin. Her eyes narrowed and she looked down at the broken plate that had already pricked her finger with a broken piece. The shock had caused her to drop it again and now it was even worse. Her finger still extended out and away from the rest of them, she began to kneel down to pick up the pieces, but something snatched her wrist and pulled her back up.

"S-Soul?"

"You cut your finger, you idiot." Soul breathed with a sigh as he held her wrist close. He then pulled her over to the sink and opened a cupboard over it, grabbed a small box of Band-Aids and set them down on the counter. Then, to her surprise he set his lips on her finger to suck some of the blood away from the wound; causing her to blush madly. Then, when his lips came away, he put her finger under the faucet water to clean it. "Make sure to be more careful when you do the dishes. I'll pick up the plate." He then said to her; setting a Band-Aid over the small finger wound.

"O-Ok…thank you…"

"Yeah, Yeah…"

Maka watched him as he walked over to the broken pieces on the ground and began picking them up. Her blush never faded as she then began washing their dishes again. Soul had always been there for her, but never had he done something like that. 'Maybe…not all guys are like Papa…' She thought to herself; picking up a steak knife to wash with the cloth under the faucet, But Soul's hand came into view again and took the knife.

"Maybe I should wash it…"

Maka glared at him for a moment but relaxed and softened her eyes; realizing that he was only worried about her…--


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I've got a tight grip on reality

But I can't let go of what's in front of me here

I know you're leaving in the morning when you wake up

Leave me with some kind of proof it's not a dream

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--After Soul became a Death Scythe he was told that he had to get to class a little earlier than her, so he'd always leave twenty minutes before her. It was hard for him at first, but he soon got used to it; mostly because he didn't like waking up with a book lodged into his cranium every morning. Since he had gotten used to it, Maka had been sleeping in and coming out to eat breakfast alone and walking to school alone. He almost wanted to skip the first couple of days because he didn't want her to walk. He wanted to be able to give her a ride at least…

"You're up early…"

Maka looked up from her bowl of cereal and smiled a tired grin. "I wanted to see you off today…" She then mumbled as Soul shut his bedroom door behind him. "Not sure why…" Soul stared at her for a moment before sighing and walking over to the kitchen to grab an apple from the bowl near the sink. Then, taking a bite, he glanced over in her direction and saw that she had her eyes on the bowl again; her finger spinning the spoon around in the milk lazily. He inwardly sighed, walked back over to her and bent over to give her an awkward but comforting hug.

"Have a nice day Maka…see you later…"

Then, he was gone; shutting the front door behind him. Maka smiled and blushed before finally taking a bite of her breakfast. Love may have not existed…but when it came to Soul…there was an exception.--



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Cause you are the only exception

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--Later that night, since Soul came home after her, she had entered an empty apartment after visiting Tsubaki for a little while. Her backpack was tossed onto her bed and she sat down on the edge with a sigh. It was Friday so there was no homework…and since she had no tests in the next couple of weeks, she didn't really need to study for anything. So…there was nothing to do that night. Or at least…not until Soul came home…When was he usually home anyway, she wondered as she glanced up to her digital clock on her nightstand. "Shouldn't he be home…now…?" As if on cue, the door opened and Soul's curious crimson eyes appeared.

"Hey…wanna go to a movie or somethin'…"

Maka glanced over to him and watched his lazy stare, and blinked. "Uh…what movie…did you have in mind?" She then asked him; receiving a shrug as an answer. So, with a sigh, Maka smiled and stood up to walk over to the door and open it all the way. "Ok." He grinned, breathing out a relieved "cool" before turning around to go set his things down into his room. Then, with a deep breath, the meister of the duo walked over to his bedroom door and waited for him to come back out. When he did, she grabbed his coat, pulled him down and lightly pressed her lips against his. Then when she pulled away, she blushed and looked away from him nervously as he stared at her with wide eyes. "I-I think I love you…by the way…"

"…O-Oh…"

"Let's go, Soul…"

"Me too." --


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And I'm on my way to believing…
A Songfic for Soul and Maka…as you can see…lol:iconimsuperhappyplz:

This song is called "The Only Exception" from Paramore: one of my favorite bands!:iconparamoreplz:

Anyway, when I first heard this song, I kinda didn't like it, but once I began listening to it a little more and listened to the lyrics I thought it described Maka's life almost perfectly…

If you haven't heard the song, listen to it. It's really pretty :D You should also try listening to it while you read. I did that and I was all like DAWWW…lol

Here's a SoulXMaka video with the song...I didnt make it though--> [link]

ENJOY!!

And let me tell you this...I DONT OWN A SINGLE GOD DAMN PERSON ON THIS SHOW .... ugh...it breaks my heart every time I say that T^T
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yaminekoyami Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Is so cute!!!!!!!! i love your story!Love
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animefreak2115 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Awesome I spend the last week look for something like this.... You made my entire week :'D
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silverleaf9 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
yeah i love paramore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ginny-chan13 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is perfect.
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Fluff fluff fluff!!! this just sums this up > :iconsomaplz: = :iconsobeautifulplz:
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boyburke13 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
CAN YOU MAKE PART 2 AND SEND ME THE LINK
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of this?
there is no part 2 o-o
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boyburke13 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT YOU NEED TO MAKE PART TWO
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
SHHH
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boyburke13 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
PLEASE
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bearyteary Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fluff!!!!!!!!!! <3 FTW :iconexcitedblushplz:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:'D
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ARTdoomy2 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
*sobbing* the last part was so beautiful! i'm a sucker for love stuff! :)
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much~
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MakaxSoulx Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great songfic!!! :)
I love the Glee version of this song!(yes I'mma Gleek! L)
The song does match with Maka's life story (and sorta mine too :()
But anyways, this is going ta mah favourites!
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
{Imma gleek too, dont worry ;P }
thanks..~
Sorry about...life..lol
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MakaxSoulx Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol Greatt!!! :) I am absolutely in love with Kurt!

yeah thanks btw lol not ur problem!! :blushes:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love him too~~

*huggles*
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MakaxSoulx Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
teehee! :D
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nkrrf Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2010
zomg i am listening to that song right now and i love it, im writing a book called the only exception
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
OOoo~ Really whats it about?
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nkrrf Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
Its about high school kids and drama. Lots of drama xD
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Raviolli101 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
Liked the way you did the song lyrics and then some of the story it was cool as soul would say! :iconxd--plz:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
lol Thanks~!
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Raviolli101 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Welcome :)
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the-doodle-queen Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i know its fits them so perfectly ;u; this fanfict was awesome +faved
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much~!
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CaffeineMarshmallow Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Student General Artist
blah... i have to use a library computer and almost cried halfway through...
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks~ Glad you liked it
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CaffeineMarshmallow Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Student General Artist
u writing style is sooo fwuzzzy!! :iconblushplz: I read Repairing a Broken Soul on fanfiction.net and my fangirl meter broke for like a week. :iconcblushplz:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
omg seriously?! Thanks~!:iconloveloveplz:
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CaffeineMarshmallow Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Student General Artist
no problem! its also so hard to find people who can draw well and write well! *points to you* I think you beat Black*Star to surpassing the gods! :iconhappyhappyplz:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I cant draw THAT well...lolz:iconcblushplz:
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CaffeineMarshmallow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student General Artist
Black*Star: *walks in* Whata did you say Nada... *evil glare*
Me: Oh dear... *runs*
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Me: When did he get here...
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Rayne63 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010
wow this was well done!
I wanna get better at fan fic...got any tips? >.<
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks^^
Tips? Well, always make sure you start a new paragragh everytime someone new speaks. Keep the details strong but dont try too hard. Try not to repeat the same words-expand your vocabulary as much as possibe, and i guess most importantly, keep your characters in character :D
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Rayne63 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
wooow, thank u thank u! soooooo much!
:tears: ur such a nice person...
i'm gonna call u senpai, 'kay? :love:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
senpai? ...:iconyayzplz: yay!! Im gunna be called senpai...:iconiloveyouplz:
Oh and your welcome:meow:
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Poxily-Tangerine Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010
Ohhhh my gosh! this is amazzinngg! I was reading it and fangirling and singing the song in my head at the same time! (Loveee Paramore and the song choice btw!) <3 <3 <3
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you so much:iconloveloveplz:
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Poxily-Tangerine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010
No prob! Lol i loved it
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Eberalovfun7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

to bad in the show it never happens because that whole freaking show is somehow about friendship and bravery!

NO person cares about bravery we want to see LOVE something around the thing you wrote. WELL DONE :clap:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you so much~!
Hopefully they will realize that and add in the LOVE~!
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Eberalovfun7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
Yep but didnt they like end the show at 51 any way:tears:

Unless they make a manga,which i will make the make,theres now way they can put that in :pissedoff:

But like half of there veiwers were SoulxMaka fans, I dont understand why they didnt add it in?:shocked:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
There is a manga...and its so far ahead that Soul's a Death Scythe and he and Maka can fly!:iconimsuperhappyplz:
And whats been happining latly, I'm sure there's going to be some kind of confession soon...Soul just got his chest cut open again and he's still fighting by himself to protect her and she's all like "I'm so stupid...I should have seen it before..." Seen "what" Maka? Hmmm...
He's telling himself to work hard and show courage too...
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Eberalovfun7 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010
OMFG!!!!!:shocked: WHat's is that name of it i NEED to read it!!!!:la:

There better be a freakin' love confession!!!! Or i will go psycho on the writers faces!!!:steaming:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Its still called Soul Eater, lol...it's hard to find though...
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Eberalovfun7 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010
Oh i just found it!! :bow:
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
YAY:iconyayzplz:
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