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Patience is the key in a healthy relationship…

Pure silence and boredom was all their relationship had been…like always…Even before their confessions…

The only difference was the exception of cuddling here and there and the fact that he actually appreciated her company when she'd sit in his room and read her huge books while he lazily read his magazines and comics. Sometimes she tutored him in closer company, but, they did that every once in awhile anyway… Books…how uncool…and yet the girl he loved read them all the time. And now…within her bedroom, he sat there hugging his knees close every so once in awhile glancing at her as she leaned up against her bed's backboard reading her favorite book. He had nothing to do…he read all his comics to the point where he was disgusted with reading even pictures…and in Maka's room, while she read, all he could do was sit on her bed and watch her.

"Maka…"

"Hmm?" She never took her eyes off of the book.

"Let me kiss you."

Gasping, Maka looked up from the pages and gave him a shocked stare. "Wha? No!" She then yelled before blushing and looking at the book again. Soul narrowed his eyes.

"Let me kiss you."

"NO!" Maka yelled again as he let go of his legs and began crawling over in her direction. She threw the book at him as he kept crawling, but all it did was hit him and fall to the floor; stopping him only for a second. "Soul stop!" She then yelled; grabbing the pillow to smack him in the side of the face and once she did, he gave her a hurtful stare.

"Why not?" Soul asked with an almost painful voice. Maka narrowed her eyes and hugged the pillow close. "We've been together how long?" She looked away, blushing. "How long Maka?" Her eyes narrowed and she kept silent as his hands came up to run through his hair. "We've been together as a "couple" for almost a year and you have yet to kiss me!" She hugged the pillow tighter and fell to the side to lie down as his feet fell to the floor. "Geez Maka…I love you and all…but this is just…not cool…" He heard a sniffle and immediately looked her way; only to see her on the brink of tears. "Maka…don't…do 'that' I was just…being selfish…I'm sorry…"

"I don't want to kiss you…" Maka uttered out; causing his eyes to widen slightly. She hugged the pillow closer and shut her eyes. "Because I'm afraid something bad will happen…" Instantly the shock faded and his eyes formed into confusion. "Like Papa…and Mama…"

"Wha? Maka…it's…it's a 'kiss'…"

"I know…but…" Maka didn't even finish her sentence before sniffling again. Soul sighed and shook his head before facing her dresser again; crossing his arms on his knees. A few minutes passed and she finally opened her eyes again to look his way. Then with a silent sigh, she sat up—never letting go of the pillow—and leaned over close to his face; causing him to look over to her. Her lips pressed against his for a full three seconds before she fell back down to lie in the same position as she was before. "There…that's all you get for the next two years." Her eyes narrowed and he saw her blush a bright red. "Maybe…maybe sooner than that…"

Soul sighed with a shake of his head and fell back to throw an arm over her. "I guess I can wait." After all patients was one of the things that you needed to stay sane around Maka Albarn. Especially if you were Soul Eater Evans.
Hi guys! :iconimhappyplz:


I'm in love with Soul and Maka's way of life...I really am. And some of you expect that if they got together they'd be kissing every single inch of each other's bodys,(pervs)

....but i believe that this would happen.

Mostly because of how paranoid Maka is about having a life like her parents. Maybe not...but what ever...I could see this happening and I could see Soul doing this just because. Anyway, enjoy this little drabble...

I think it's my first story under 1,000 words...:iconthatsgreatplz:

I dont own Soul Eater! If I did, do you really think I'd be writing this stuff!? GOD! ... lol
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:iconblujay123:
blujay123 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
that was to cute!
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BluewolfGodith Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student General Artist
aww! so cute! i love it!
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Toxic-Harmony13 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Artist
I can really imagine this story happening between them. It was really great.
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yeah me too~
thanks :3
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Toxic-Harmony13 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Student Artist
your welcome. You should write more with them.
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StarfireLuvRobin7 Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
cute. lol
yeah.. I totally see this happening.
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Raviolli101 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
Soul can kiss me anytime!!!! ;)
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Same here :D
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Raviolli101 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Ha :iconxd--plz:
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happypicture Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010
:iconirapeitplz:
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:iconiloveitmoreplz:
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happypicture Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010
:iconirapeitplz:
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soulgirl-3 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
luv it u should write another one to this
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks^^
another? Maybe...lol
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soulgirl-3 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
well its what ever u decide
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kokoro-s2 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
awww~~
it's just adorable -^w^-
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You^^
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kokoro-s2 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
you're welcome ^w^
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BeansOfYuki Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
Awww... Kawaii.
:iconiloveyouplz:
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~!
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BeansOfYuki Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
No Prob~!:hug:
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Kyoushu-Ookami Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Student Digital Artist
cute!
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You^^
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Kyoushu-Ookami Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Student Digital Artist
your welcome ^^
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TheCreativeJenn Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
This awesome fanfiction has been FEATURED!!!
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:iconnarusaku1357:
Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
OMG seriously?! YAAAAAY!! :iconyayzplz:
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NasikaSakura Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Aww. . .
"'That's all you get for the next two years. . !'" :lol:
This is so cute. . . Now I just want to read the manga because of this, and I'm interested as to the story with her parrents. Don't tell me though, I might get into Soul Eater this way! :D

It. . . kinda reminds me of myself in a way. . . >////////////////<
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Soul and Maka arent really together though sadly...
so dont get all disapointed when u see them arguing as if they hate each other
Truth is...they're so CLOSE in their friendship...its not even funny...
might as well say they're madly in love with each other...

I wont tell you about Papa and Mama :D I promise~!
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NasikaSakura Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Gosh. Yor writing inspired me and I made a NasuSasu comic bases on it. -______- I'll give you credit if I ever get to post it.
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
lol Seriously?
Haha cute :3 i cant wait to read it
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KittyCatDayleaf Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Oh gawsh that was funny and cute at the same time xD
OHMAHY
CRACK PAIRING: Picture this scene, with Maka and Black*Star.
Then Lmao for like 5 mins straight. 8D
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Teddywangdoodle Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, I did that and I literally started rofling. I tried to smother my laughter with anything nearby cuz everyone else is asleep., lol.
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you :D
lol Black*Star and Maka in that scene...He would have blown up much more than Soul did XD
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KittyCatDayleaf Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
He'd prob say something along the lines of: YOU DON'T HAVE THE GUTS TO KISS MY GODDLYNESS.
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Narusaku1357 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha he probably would...he probably would lolz XD
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KittyCatDayleaf Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
He would. I swear XD
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